Tuesday 21 February 2012

Feedback For Improvements.

The feedback that i was given shows me that there was 5 areas that was assessed and that three out of the five were at level 4
  • (shotlists,layouts, layouts, drafting, scripting/storyboarding)
  • time management
  • level of care in the presentation of research and planning
however their are two areas that i need to improve on to get them up to level 4 as they are currently of level 3 and these are:

  • research into similar products and a potential target audience
  • organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props.
i was given feedback from my teachers of what i need to do to improve my work to get it all up to level 4 and in the range of 16-20marks.


  • i need to define who my target audience is
  • include images on makeup and costumes in the posts that are already created
  • add Recce to the post already made
  • how each research element is beneficial to my magazine ideas.

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