Rough Cuts Feedback

• FRONT COVER:

quite a bit of white space needs filling
add a skyline
barcode needs to be smaller
sell lines border (red ones)
need to add 'HAYLEY' to front page near the image

• CONTENTS:

add puff
good layout
use all frames
add another image
add a subscription box
'contents' needs to be bigger
check and compare professional contents page

• DPS:

introduce the model
mast head needs to be bigger and more dynamic
kick
drop cap

Above is the feedback that i was given by my teachers. From the feedback that was given it is clear to see that i have many improvements to make to make sure that my work is at its full potential. Although my rough cuts are in mark band 4 and are getting 16/20 marks i want to get more marks so that i can reach my final grade so these adjustments will get me to the top of the mark band.