DPS improvements

here it shows how i have added a introduction to my interviewer which was one of the improvements that i was told to make on my rough cuts because the only introduction was in the actual article and most readers want to know who they are reading about first before they make up their minds of if they are going to read on or not. Also it is good to have an introduction as it is seen as more formal.

here it shows how i have increased the size of the header, the reason why i have done this is that it needs to be understandable and readable for all the readers who intend on purchasing my magazine. i also improved the font as the font that i had in my rough cuts wasn't as understandable as this. By changing each of these aspects it allows the header to look more dynamic and more professional which was my intended aim.

in the magazines DPS that have made it in the professional magazine they all have a quote insert. i decided to put a few of these in my article to make it look more professional. I didn't actually get told to do this in my improvements feed back that i was given however when looking at other magazines that are on shop shelves i have seen numerous amounts of these which made me think that it was an improvement that i could do in order for people to think that it was more professional so in hope they would purchase it. 

in my rough cut feedback i was told that i need to include a drop cap and this is when the first letter of the article is in a larger font that the rest. i did this so that it looked more professional as other magazines have this already included. before including a drop cap my article was all the same size which made it look boring.